Because the reader is adamant with his unique and captivating use of emotional words, he has therefore inserted an unnecessary controversial topic that he should have avoided. After that little hiccup in his powerful introduction, he uses this preparation to raise several important questions about environmental risk management, but they are still very misleading. He talks about risk and how environmental risks should be managed, but it turns out he was talking about company managers who seek risk in their work to protect companies from losing money. He notes the questions they should pay attention to and the amount of hazardous waste that should be stored on site. The author tries to bring these two topics together but confuses readers about what exactly he means in terms of environmental risk until halfway through the article. However, Norman Wei raised great questions, but did not elaborate enough on some topics when he mentioned them. It should have provided more detail as to why these questions are being raised and how they are relevant. Overall, this article interests the reader from the beginning with its powerful use of emotion and tone, but quickly stops. The article should have been longer and provided more feedback on the arguments presented and the question it left